my new dawn

sky at dusk

Posted on: November 18, 2012

i see the dim and dusky sky

like pastel gauze stretched far and wide

swathed in waning light that gently sighs

before the whisperings of the

deepening shades of night

~ paul


2 Responses to "sky at dusk"

This is a lovely poem, Paul! The word “swathed” fits the image perfectly.

thanks very much, Abigail

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